The Best Story Ever بقلم عبدالرحمن البريكي ( قصة حقيقيه خلتني أخذ A )

[عبدالرحمن بن فجري]

السلام عليكم

اما بعد ...

في يوم من الأيام عندنا حصة أنجلش هني بجامعتي والدكتوره طلبت من كل واحد بكلاس انه يكتب قصه سواء كانت هالقصه من وحي الخيال ولا صارت على أرض الواقع .....

وانا كتبت قصه كانت مؤلمتني من مده وحبيت اعبر عنهاا واكتبها وكتبتها والحمدلله بمساعده بسيطه من أصدقائي الامريكان ...

ما وعيت الا الدكتوره بنص القصه اللي طولها 4 صفحات تأثرت حيل .. وانصدمت أكثر لمن شفتها بأخير القصه بدأت تبكي ... وحتى اللي معاي بالكلاس كل اللي يقرا القصه يتأثر حيل ..

وبعدين اختارت تعبيري وقصتي لتكون الأافضل ولتشارك بمسابقه والحمدلله حلت قصتي بالمركز الثالث على مستوى الجامعه وعلى مستوى كلاسات الأنجلش الأاخرى وهذا انجاز عظيم لطالب يتكلم اللغه الأنجليزيه كلغه ثانيه غير اللغه الأم

حبيت اشاركم قصتي اللي هي حقيقيه وحدثتلي على ارض الواقع ... وان شاء الله تعجبكم وان شاء الله تتثبت وأتمنى التفاعل
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Abdulrahman Alazemi
UNIV 112
I was a very smart student since I was a child. I used to earn the highest percentage among my classmates in every year since I was in the elementary school. In the last year of high school which decides what my future will be, I had many obstacles and many difficulties in my way. I needed to get a high percentage to let me go to college and choose the best major. My friends and fiancee were the main obstacles in the way of getting good grades and to be successful in life.
Fatmah is my fiancee. She is the source of happiness in my life, and I won’t love any person the way I love Fatmah. We used to spend all the night talking to each other through phone. Every time I’m free and I don’t have anything to do, I find myself calling her. Indeed, sometimes while I’m super busy, I call her to hear her voice and to talk to her because every time I talk to her, I feel good. I met here when we both were 15 and we grew up together, and we were together for 4 years. Many times while I’m busy and studying, I ignore what I’m doing and go out to see her when she go out with her mother to do shopping or while she is with her mother having a launch together. I always see her while she is with her mother because dating is prohibited in Kuwait and in Islam. Every time I see her, even though, I don’t hold her hand and I don’t talk to her face to face, I feel happy and keep thinking of her the whole day. She has always been a huge part of my life, and she is the one that I wanted to have children with.
In the beginning of the last year of high school, I was going out with my friends and Fatmah a lot, so I was ignoring school work a lot. And I was staying up late with them and I was going to bed late, so I was sleepy and tired in school the next day and I didn’t pay attention to the teacher. My mother was saying “You have to stay at home, you don’t study at all, Your friends and Fatmah won’t be useful and won’t help you if you fail!” I always ignored her words and I always ignored her advice. In the end of the first month, they gave us our grades for the first month and my overall grade was C and I was seventh in the class, and this was a shock for me because my overall grade used to be A and I used to be the highest one in the whole school not just my class.
When I told my mother about my grade, she became angry. Then, she said while she was crying, “I told you to study and to stay away from your friends and from Fatmah, they are a bad influence on you, and you will be a loser without a degree.” Then she left and told my father about my grades. I didn’t tell him because my father scares me. I’m always afraid of him. Then, my father was yelling and saying “Abdulrahman, You have to study hard and you have to leave your friends and Fatmah! I’ll take your phone and your laptop to keep you out of touch with them. Pay attention to your studies!” I told my brother to tell my friends and Fatmah what happened. For four months I didn’t talk to my friends to Fatmah, and I studied most of the time, and I went to bed early, and I paid attention in class, and every one of my teachers noticed the difference and they were happy. On the other hand, my friends were still going out and hanging out with each other, and this was killing me, and making me upset. My mother said to me “in the end of the year you will see that you did the best thing by staying away from your friends and studying a lot. Then, you will go out and have fun a lot. In contrast, they will fail and they will be sad and the will repeat the year again!”
In the end of the year, my percentage was the highest in the school and my overall grade was A. As a result of this my father was happy and my mother too, and they bought me a new phone and they were proud of me. The problem is that not one of my friends called me to say congratulations and not one of them was happy for me! I confronted my friends Fahad, Fiasal, and Abdullah in Fahad’s house.
I said, “I miss you guys, did you miss me guys? Did you hear about my grades? How are you guys, what did you do in finals?”
Faisal said, “Are you the first one in Kuwait to get these grades?”
Fahad said, “Yes and we didn’t miss you. We forgot that we have a friend whose name is Abdulrahman”
Abdullah said, “You lost us. You are stupid! You are such a girl! You stayed at home like girls and studied while we were hanging out!”
They said, “Go find new friends! We don’t want you anymore.”
They were trying to make me sad and angry. In contrast, I was smiling and I was happy. When they saw that I won’t get angry, they threw a shoe on me! This is so rude in my culture. Then, I got angry and I had a fighting with them. Fatmah was not much better. I called her to tell her my good news. She said, “I don’t want to see you phone number in my cell phone screen! Don’t call me anymore please! I’m committed with someone else now. I don’t want you and I don’t love you anymore!”
Not one of my friends and Fatmah came to the airport when I left Kuwait to study in America. I’m now here in the U.S and my grades are good. I have many friends here and I’m happy here. I saw Fatmah’s best friend in Kuwait when I went there for a break, and she told me that Fatmah broke up with the guy she was committed with and now she’s with another man and she’s not doing good at school. Then I started to laugh. One day in the same break when I was in Kuwait, I went to my little sister’s school to take her to home because my parents were busy and they can’t take her, and my high school is next to my little sister’s school, and I saw Fahad and Abdullah getting out of the school, and I started to laugh again because they repeated the final year of high school 2 times till that day, and I heard that Faisal stopped going to school and he’s staying at home not doing anything. Then, I went to my mother I hugged her, and I told her while I was crying and happy at same time “I love you, you were right, you saved my life, I love you, I love you, I love you”

written by : Abdulrahman Alazemi

كتبت بواسطة : عبدالرحمن بن فجري البريكي

واتمنى بألأأخير انه محد ينسخهاا حق المدرسه ولا حق أي شي ثاني ههههههههههههههه

واتمنى من الكل قرايتهاا والمشاركه والرد خصوصاا الناس اهل العقول الناضجه والحكيمه وكبار المنتدى

[{..غموض..}]

القصه حلوه وتاثر حلوو انك تطيع امك ..؟؟

حسافه كنت بلطشها .؟!!
موفق خير ومنها للاعلى

قواك الله

[عبدالرحمن بن فجري]

اقتباس: المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة {..غموض بليحي..}    القصه حلوه وتاثر حلوو انك تطيع امك ..؟؟ حسافه كنت بلطشها .؟!! موفق خير ومنها للاعلى قواك الله

مشكؤوؤوره لوؤول زين في احد قرا القصه وعبرني

السالفه مو اني طعت امي السالفه ... بالأاحداث والعبره اللي صارت ... والقصه حقيقيه ...

مشكؤوره وانتي بعد

ولا تلطشينهاا لأأن حقوق الطبع محفوظه

[الشـجـن]

الله قصه رااائعه بصراااحه
والله يخليك امك وتحققك اماانيك ولا تحاااول اتزعلهاا ولا اتضااايقهااا
وشكرااا لك قصه رااائعه بالفعل

[عبدالرحمن بن فجري]

اقتباس: المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الشـجـن    الله قصه رااائعه بصراااحه والله يخليك امك وتحققك اماانيك ولا تحاااول اتزعلهاا ولا اتضااايقهااا وشكرااا لك قصه رااائعه بالفعل

مشكوؤوره جدا جدا جدا جدا اختي الشجن على المرور ...

من الأاعضاء اللي كان ودي انهم يقرون موضوعي ويلعقون عليه هو انتي والله ...

شرفتي مووضوعي والله ومشكؤوره على مرورج الأاروع

وحاظر وما يكون خاطرج الا طيب اختي الشجن وطلباتج أوامر

ماني مزعل ام عبدالرحمن أبد

[الشـجـن]

اقتباس: المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالرحمن البريكي    مشكوؤوره جدا جدا جدا جدا اختي الشجن على المرور ... من الأاعضاء اللي كان ودي انهم يقرون موضوعي ويلعقون عليه هو انتي والله ... شرفتي مووضوعي والله ومشكؤوره على مرورج الأاروع وحاظر وما يكون خاطرج الا طيب اختي الشجن وطلباتج أوامر ماني مزعل ام عبدالرحمن أبد

العفووو ما سووويت شي
والشرف لي اناا
والارووع مووضوعك
والله يوفقك

[نادرة]

ممكن ترجمها للعربية ههههههههه اسفة حلوة القصة الله يوفقك

[عبدالرحمن بن فجري]

اقتباس: المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نادرة    ممكن ترجمها للعربية ههههههههه اسفة حلوة القصة الله يوفقك

لوؤول نادره الظاهر نص المنتدى مو فاهم القصه جذي ليش ماكو تعليقاات

شكلي بترجمهاا الله العالم هههههههههههههه

مدري منو قالي حلوه القصه ..جان اقوؤله قريتها .. قال اي .. قلت فهمتهااا .. قال اي .. قلت شلون .. قال الله يخلي الوافي ههههههههههه

زين اعجبتج القصه ومشكوره على مرورج

[هيبـة قصيـد]

اخوي عبدالرحمن


ماشاءالله وروووعة روووعة القصه
وتستاهل المركز الاول مو الثالث


وآحلى شي آخر شي الصراحة
معبره والله وخاصتا سالفة ربعك
وهذا جزا اللي مايدرس ويسعسع بالشوارع <<جنها طبت فيهم :P

وآحسن شي يوم ياخذون تلفونك
عجبووني الصراحة
أمزح يااخوك

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[رطيبي]

Then, I went to my mother I hugged her, and I told her while I was crying and happy at same time “I love you, you were right, you saved my life, I love you, I love you, I love you”

عـبدالرحـمن
الـله يعطيك العـآفيه وأهـم شي رضـى الـوالـده الله يخليهـآ لـك
وألف ألـف مبروك الفوز بالقصه المعبره
والله يوفقك